One Student's Progress

Can learners' writing improve if I don't show them their mistakes?

We have gathered these three pieces from a single student to show progress over a few months. When you click each link below, you will hear Kate responding to the writing sample as she did in the writing group.

Please note, when multiple videos appear on a page they are intended to be viewed one at a time. 

The Roosevelt Elk (written in September)

(Untitled) (written in January)

Hunting Trip (written in May)